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As The Sun Sets Over The Horizon

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The date is October 14th, 2003.
The location is Vinica, The Republic Of Macedonia.
A boy, no older than 14 sits on his front door steps.
He is then approached by a girl.
Her name is Athena.
She asks him to come with her to a nearby hill.
He asks why she is inquiring this.
She says that she wants to go out on a date with him.
The boy is hesitant, but then agrees to the offer.
The time is 6:43 P.M.
Athena, and the boy reach the top of the hill.
They sit down and hold hands and look down at all of Vinica.
They continue to do this for 33 minutes.
At 7:01 P.M. they here a scream come from the bottom of the hill.
They immediately turn around and see a man with torn black clothes, and a top hat and mask come running up the hill.
As soon as they come in eye contact with this man a feeling of deep fear and dread comes up them.
"<span id="result_box" class="" lang="mk">Јас сум роб на ѓаволот! Пеколи гневот се доделува врз мене<span class="">!" the man yells.
As soon as Athena and the boy hear this they knew that they are doomed.
Athena starts to pray and just sits there, muttering in Macedonian.
The boy immediately gets up and starts to run away.
The man then caught him and whipped out a butcher knife, and began to slice and cut away at the boy.
"Како не на сечилото на пеколот се чувствуваат против вашите смртни кожа? Одговорете ми! Какво е чувството?" the man stammers.
The boy couldn't reply but only cry in agony and pain.
The man then took his bloody blade in hand, and cut off the boys head.
The head rolled down the hill, occasionally bouncing off rocks.
The man, now covered in blood, started to very slowly trek up the hill to the girl, still sitting there praying.
The man walked up to the girl, and said,
"Ти, ти си храбар, но вашите напори ќе се покаже да не се земе во предвид."
He then grabbed the girl by the neck and slowly began to carve the Pagan symbol into her face.
As the blood from the cut trickled down her face the man licked it all up with great passion.
He then proceeded to stabbing the girl 7 times in the heart.
The time is now 7:21 P.M.
The man has left the hill and Athena and the boy are both dead.
And as the sun sets over the horizon the man enters his house, removes his hat and mask, and stabs himself in the heart 2 times before falling to the ground dead.
The time is now 7:32 P.M.
The man, Athena, and the boy are all dead.
And only one person is happy.
The devil.


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Just a story I wrote.
I wanted to write a story with a realistic crime and murderous feel to it.
I think I did it just right.
THIS STORY IS 100% FICTIONAL!!! THE EVENTS IN THIS STORY ARE NOT BASED ON ANY ACTUAL EVENTS!!!
Here's some translation notes:
First line of Macedonian: I'm a slave to the devil! Hell's Wrath is bestowed upon me!
Second line of Macedonian: How does the blade of hell feel against your mortal skin? Answer me! How does it feel?
Third line of Macedonian: You, you're brave, but your efforts will prove not to be considered.
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